This week I am participating in Mama Kat's Writer's Workshop. I chose a prompt and then took literary liberties.
Writer's Prompt: Describe the first date you went on in a boy’s car.
I wondered if I still had a boyfriend. I mean, I'd been dating him for about 10 months but I kind of went M.I.A. the past two. I'd just come home from an adventure out of the country and he hadn't called. I lamented the state of my love life to an acquaintance, Scott. He had the perfect guy for me. Of course he did. Everybody did. More often than not, it was a charity case. Worse, I was the charity case and the guy wasn't any winner which hurt my ego. I was 25 years old, single, and becoming a menace to society.
"What's wrong with him," I demanded.
"Nothing." Pause. "He's going into social work." I could think of worse things.
He called me a couple of days later. We talked, had a good conversation and he asked to take me out to dinner. I wondered if I still had that boyfriend so agreed to lunch, instead. He wondered what time to pick me up. I told him I'd meet him there. I'd had my share of stalkers. I was not going to tell him where I lived and I was not going to get in the car with him.
We met at a Mongolian Barbecue place. We had a good time. I liked what I saw. I liked how I felt. Still no word from the proverbial boyfriend so I asked my date out for the following night. Just in case he was an axe murderer, though, I told him I'd meet him again. No need to to come pick me up.
The next night my date was determined to find out where I lived. Sounded like a stalker to me. He finally charmed me with the line, "Let's just say that I have an extra $5 and I wanted to drop it off at your house." Fine. I told him my address. There were no google maps, GPS, or anything to help him. He'd never find it. It was out in the country with a county address.
The next day I found an envelope with a $5 bill inside. Was I creeped out? Was I flattered?
A few days later, we went on a picnic in the mountains. I let him drive. We came back to my house and were hanging out when the boyfriend called. I guess I did still have a boyfriend. I put him off and returned to my date. I walked him out to his car and came clean. "I have a boyfriend," I announced. And so he kissed me. I tried again. "He just called me." He kissed me again.
Nineteen years have passed since that week. He still knows my address.
Writer's Prompt: Describe the first date you went on in a boy’s car.
I wondered if I still had a boyfriend. I mean, I'd been dating him for about 10 months but I kind of went M.I.A. the past two. I'd just come home from an adventure out of the country and he hadn't called. I lamented the state of my love life to an acquaintance, Scott. He had the perfect guy for me. Of course he did. Everybody did. More often than not, it was a charity case. Worse, I was the charity case and the guy wasn't any winner which hurt my ego. I was 25 years old, single, and becoming a menace to society.
"What's wrong with him," I demanded.
"Nothing." Pause. "He's going into social work." I could think of worse things.
He called me a couple of days later. We talked, had a good conversation and he asked to take me out to dinner. I wondered if I still had that boyfriend so agreed to lunch, instead. He wondered what time to pick me up. I told him I'd meet him there. I'd had my share of stalkers. I was not going to tell him where I lived and I was not going to get in the car with him.
We met at a Mongolian Barbecue place. We had a good time. I liked what I saw. I liked how I felt. Still no word from the proverbial boyfriend so I asked my date out for the following night. Just in case he was an axe murderer, though, I told him I'd meet him again. No need to to come pick me up.
The next night my date was determined to find out where I lived. Sounded like a stalker to me. He finally charmed me with the line, "Let's just say that I have an extra $5 and I wanted to drop it off at your house." Fine. I told him my address. There were no google maps, GPS, or anything to help him. He'd never find it. It was out in the country with a county address.
The next day I found an envelope with a $5 bill inside. Was I creeped out? Was I flattered?
A few days later, we went on a picnic in the mountains. I let him drive. We came back to my house and were hanging out when the boyfriend called. I guess I did still have a boyfriend. I put him off and returned to my date. I walked him out to his car and came clean. "I have a boyfriend," I announced. And so he kissed me. I tried again. "He just called me." He kissed me again.
Nineteen years have passed since that week. He still knows my address.
But does he still leave $5 in an envelope for ya?
ReplyDelete19 years...quite a persistent stalker, isn't he? He might be worth keeping around.
*sniff* that is the sweetest stalking story evah! congrats!!
ReplyDeleteSave this story forever!!! That is so sweet! Keep him around too, he's definitely a keeper...
ReplyDeleteOH wow...that just gave me the chills. What a fantastic story! Thanks for sharing.
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I've never heard this story - so sweet! i wasn't around when all this was going on and i really missed out. i can't believe it's been 19 years. i'm glad he still knows your address. keep on kissing!
ReplyDeleteSuch a cute story! Glad you gave that guy a chance!
ReplyDeleteLove that story! He definitely sounds like a keeper.
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